Review: Breaking Out Part II by Michelle Diener

September 17, 2015 Review 0

Review: Breaking Out Part II by Michelle DienerBreaking Out Part 2 by Michelle Diener
Published by Signet Eclipse on July 15, 2015
Genres: Adult, Contemporary, Romance, Romantic, Science Fiction, Urban Fantasy
Format: eBook
Pages: 97
Source: Author
Sexual Content: Kissing, references to sex.
Reviewed by: Julia
3 Stars

Kelli, Nate and Giles know what it is to be imprisoned. They spent years locked away in a secret research lab. But now they're free, and they stole something important just before they escaped – a list of others like themselves, sent to other facilities for further experimentation.

Their plan? To break out every single one.

Nina Calvados has been in a new facility for four months. She's kept a low profile, been careful to be cooperative and helpful. And so far, she's been mostly left alone. So when two other inmates appeal to her for help, her heart may want to oblige but her head is screaming walk away.

Only, something bad is going down, and Nina realizes she's been fooling herself. No one's bought her low profile act. And if she's going to crash, she might as well crash hard. After all, it's not as if anyone's coming for her, is it?

Please note: Breaking Out: Part II is a novella of 21,000 words and is the sequel to the short story, Breaking Out: Part I.

BREAKING OUT PART 1 was a fantastic short from the ENTANGLED anthology, quickly establishing charming characters and a compelling world.  But as much as I wanted a continuation of this world, BREAKING OUT PART 2 is too short to fulfill the promise of that first, explosive meet-cute.

The first short in this duo introduces Kelli and Nate as love interests, and Giles as the charming best friend.  PART 2 flashes forward to a few weeks after their escape, with Giles taking center stage.  Giles is witty and interesting, with a supernatural power that can be as much of a handicap as a benefit, and has no problem filling the spot light.  Kelli and Nate, however, have never really gotten the chance to develop their own story.  What page time they get in PART 2 isn't enough to satisfy my interest in their romance (I want to see everyone one of Nate's tentative attempts to hug a gunshy Kelli, not just hear about them after the fact!).

Ultimately, the strengths of the BREAKING OUT series is its greatest weakness, too much potential and not enough page time.  Worth picking up for the price, I won't come back to this series until we get a full length feature.

Series Titles:
  1. Breaking Out Part 1
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